Seven and Seven
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3/27/2025 for Each Star Has A Pattern Of Its Own Poetry Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose
A forlorn star up in the sky
cried and cried, oh what a pity.
No matter how it is I try,
stars with five points, so pretty,
and snowflake stars, easy on the eye,
so elegant and witty,
will always little boys enchant
when a seven-pointed star can't.
One night, the seventh of July,
a strange and lonely boy was born
below a clear and starry sky.
Abandoned in a field of corn,
he wished upon a star so high,
but he remained sad and forlorn
till his light shone from the heavens.
He could hear and see in sevens.
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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