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Setbacks Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negrom missing link unknown her death my pity hindrance lessening of growth regressed innocence before successful progress life’s impediment severe frustration defeated bloodline mourning extinct from her loss thirsty for closure beyond my intelligence woe relapsed from strength prayers heal my heart yesterday’s setbacks bring hope struggle gains freedom ~1st Place Winner~ Date Written: July 6, 2016

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Date: 7/13/2016 5:49:00 PM
Congrats Laura, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest !! ;-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/18/2016 11:01:00 AM
thank you Teddy :)-luloo
Date: 7/12/2016 6:50:00 PM
Congrats Laura to win first place on your nice piece. Love.
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:33:00 AM
thank you sweet Anisha :)-luloo
Date: 7/12/2016 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place, Laura, well written piece. Barry.
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Barry:)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 4:43:00 PM
Great work on your impressive 1st place win in the setbacks contest! Jesse
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Date: 7/11/2016 6:58:00 PM
thank you Jesse :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 12:53:00 PM
Each word is beautiful,congratulations Laura!
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Date: 7/11/2016 1:42:00 PM
thank you Sara :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 11:26:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win. I like the pic an d all it says in the write. :)
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Date: 7/11/2016 11:46:00 AM
thank you Sunita :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 9:22:00 AM
Sadness and hope beautifully brought out. Congratulations on your perfect top spot, Laura. ~karam~
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:50:00 AM
thank you Karam :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations, Luloo, on your Trophy First Place win in the 'setbacks' Premiere Contest! Your 'setbacks' were of the most sorrowful kind, but still, hope and prayers help to heal your heart. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:50:00 AM
thank you so much for all your kind words all the time sweet lady, you are the best :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 8:44:00 AM
Interesting and well written poem. I've not tried the senryu yet - Congratulations on your win
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:49:00 AM
thank you RA :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the Setbacks contest.
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Date: 7/11/2016 8:06:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on a wonderful win, Laura:)
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:49:00 AM
thank you sweet Jo :)-luloo
Date: 7/8/2016 6:36:00 PM
I enjoyed this set, Laura. Especially that last one. This one I have to try quickly. It's a very popular contest. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/9/2016 3:33:00 PM
many thanks lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 7/8/2016 1:46:00 PM
Excellent pen my lovely smiling friend. A clear 7 and wishing good luck. Loved always, bl
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/9/2016 3:32:00 PM
many thanks BL:)-luloo
Date: 7/7/2016 9:14:00 AM
You have taken setbacks to a whole new descriptive level, nicely done.
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Date: 7/7/2016 9:43:00 AM
thank you Casarah :)-luloo
Date: 7/7/2016 1:09:00 AM
I loved the last senryu so much:)
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Date: 7/7/2016 9:41:00 AM
thank you Jo, I knew you would :)-luloo