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Set Us Free

In organic dust our soul must adjust that we side step paths unjust, renounce ways of lust to be, as elders discussed, love and light stardust, so free. Simple is soul’s plea; let head-heart agree to rise declutched from mind tree, busy like a bee unwise, enmeshed in envy, unable to see through lies. Once our false self dies, soul climbs to new highs as must, so opening eyes let’s clearly apprise unjust acts, heeding love’s cries, that God’s laws applies, we trust. 19-May-2023 Virelai

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/19/2023 7:51:00 AM

Beautiful soulful words sprinkled with your heart’s insight ! I love ~ love and light stardust, so free. Simple is soul’s plea; let head-heart agree to rise . I could see these words spoken aloud on a stage ! Blessings US ! Susan :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/19/2023 8:09:00 AM

Thank you dear Susan! To be honest, I wrote this one only to practice this not so easy poetry form. I still haven’t got the hang of it! So delighted you enjoyed!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/19/2023 5:46:00 AM

I see you are not blocking your poetry. Never the purpose. I know we don't always agree but mostly your poetry is fabulous. This one is incredibly so poetic.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/19/2023 7:47:00 AM

Yes … I had accidentally blocked you and someone else too, who was deeply offended and refused to accept the possibility as unintended. Happens. Too bad. Hope you are doing well, Victor.

Andrew John

Date: 5/19/2023 4:19:00 AM

Lovely way to see the relationship among heart, head, mind, seen in the way we talk of them. No soul of course - once we're dead we're dead - but it's great to talk of parts of us that amalgamate as such a thing Nice one, Unseeking Seeker. Thank you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/19/2023 7:43:00 AM

Soul, no soul or God, no God ~ such beliefs are in mind. Nonbelievers are not sure, believers are also unsure! Direct recognition reveals the truth, whereupon no doubts remain.