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Service With a Smile

The sign reads no service if you take off your shoes but if you come in to my place I'll take them off you Have a seat at my counter I'll get to you real soon one sip of this coffee I'm damn sure you'll swoon Breakfast is simmering you'll find the sausage divine mouth watering perfection it's one of a kind Church bells are ringing the bluebirds start singing no need for tipping the first one's on me

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/5/2017 9:25:00 AM

Awe, a wonderful poem, Tim, Bless is the day of kindness. Congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/26/2017 11:25:00 PM

I just saw POTD, so back to say Congrats!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2017 3:59:00 AM

- Sorry, a little late Tim ... but, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2017 10:32:00 AM

So nice, Tim! Congrats on POTD!

Sara Ella

Date: 10/23/2017 11:04:00 PM

Congratulations Tim :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/23/2017 10:21:00 PM

Full service with a smile! Congrats on potd, usually start here, I missed a great breakfast :) xomo!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2017 6:53:00 PM

Tim, congratulations on having your poem honored with POTD my friend!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2017 3:51:00 PM

many congrats on POTD Tim, I've been busy all day and not had time to read and comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:04:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Isaac Odah

Date: 10/23/2017 3:49:00 PM

Congrats, great poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Isaac

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/23/2017 10:45:00 AM

Congrats!!! Timmy...POTD!!!...yahoo!!!...^WW^

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:03:00 PM

Thx WW...go warriors

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 10:40:00 AM

Back to congratulate you for POTD honors...

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:03:00 PM

Thx again

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/23/2017 10:03:00 AM

Sounds like a diner. I love diners! Much more comfortable in a diner than a fancy restaurant. Shame on me! I'm supposed to be a "lady." LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:02:00 PM

Ladies like a good diner

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/23/2017 8:15:00 AM

Perfect service... Congratulations on POTD Your poem is a standard we should all attain... All the best my friend

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thanks Arturo

Carol B.

Date: 10/23/2017 7:42:00 AM

Congrats on receiving POTD!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thanks Carol

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/23/2017 6:56:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD, Tim. I am reading this over breakfast, and it sounded very friendly and inviting.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Agnes

Darren White

Date: 10/23/2017 5:31:00 AM

My friend, grats on PotD :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thanks D :)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/23/2017 5:08:00 AM

Your breakfast spot has been exposed to many now that's it's become potd. ;-)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:57:00 PM

Sure has

Jean Murray

Date: 10/23/2017 12:15:00 AM

Sounds like I would swoon at that sausage Tim. So the coffee will come in handy to revive me.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/23/2017 4:14:00 PM

That place is going to be packed out now you got POTD Tim. Please keep me that sausage I ordered.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:57:00 PM

lol...thanks Jean

Carol B.

Date: 10/22/2017 3:07:00 PM

Sounds like my kind of place. :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:56:00 PM

Thx Carol

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/22/2017 9:24:00 AM

Wow! Can I drop by? Great service, Tim:)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:54:00 PM

Sure can

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/22/2017 8:06:00 AM

I love three-cup Sunday. A buzz, a bite, some ball... a nap. From my recliner to yours, I'll be "write" over, ready to swoon. What a sweet early morning read! Go Bears! Wait, do they have a team? Chips 'n salsa! ~ john

Tim Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:54:00 PM

the nap sounds good...bears d looks good