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Serve Egoless Like Nature - El

Our ego soars reaching sky While earth bound, in earth we die Nature loves, provides for all Still has no ego at all Why not like a river flow? Serving all while on the go Our ego soars reaching sky 09.07.2021 For Elemental, charles messina

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Bhawana Pant

Date: 7/31/2021 10:09:00 AM

Congrats!! Serve egoless like nature....very true.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 6:23:00 AM

Very nicely written, Rama. Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:41:00 AM

This is very beautiful writing. Far better than mine. In fact, I made it with your constructive corrections. Thank you for the same. Congratulations on your placement!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/11/2021 10:12:00 AM

I love the comparisons in this awesome, stirring verse, in which wisdom abounds. Best wishes for the contest. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/10/2021 3:51:00 AM

Wise words, Rama:)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2021 3:41:00 AM

Thank you for your information about Elemental. I was careless in reading the rules. I shall rework it.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/10/2021 4:15:00 AM

You are welcome

Eve Roper

Date: 7/9/2021 8:10:00 PM

Great write, Rama. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/9/2021 6:21:00 PM

Very evocative! why not flow like river?—remains connected to the ground while resolutely pushing its way to the sea.. So much wisdom in few words!!! best luck for the sure win!