Serenity Rain

The sounds of the rain
whisper to me, a sonet of water angels.
As I watch it flow,
a song of happiness and sadness 
comes to mind.
The voices harmonize 
in perfect melody,
getting attention from the
invisible notes.
The gentle swaying 
of its calm solace relaxes me.
The loudness of thunder
awakens my relaxation.
But, as I focus more on
the sonet,
my relaxation returns
with great quietude.
I have fallen into a deep slumber and 
so I end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 10/20/2009 10:19:00 AM
i.....adore this xo Raiin
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Date: 2/12/2009 10:03:00 AM
I truly love this write. It's like you wrote the words I feel when it rains. I love it when it rains, I sleep better. Thanks for sharing. Great write.
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Date: 12/10/2008 9:30:00 AM
Oh you guys are so welcome :) I really appreciate all the comments I get because I try really hard on my poems... I think most people are older than me.. Im in 9th grade and Im 14... I've been writing poetry all my life. People around me don't really understand me and Im glad I found this site. Its helped me alot since I've joined!! Thanks again!!!! :)
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Date: 12/10/2008 8:56:00 AM
beautiful write and really enjoyed it alot, this is pretty poem and it really hits home with emotions. thank you for sharing it with us.
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:45:00 AM
One of the prettiest poems I've read today. It embodies tranquil imagery and has a quiet, gentle lilt to it. Makes the reader feel dreamy and comforted. Wishing you and yours enjoy a Happy & Joyous Holiday season. Peace and happiness always, John
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:10:00 AM
I love your poem.. as I love the rain.. a storm.. thank you for your comment on my poem. "My Song To Thee" Constance
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