Serenity On a Friday

As Friday's messes my hair in knots, the chaotic boom of a night begins to subside: a gentler sway from the park juts forward , almost caressing my flesh… a relay of new stars and powdered mist whorl among balmy trees glowing in the pale dark ... I am led to some kind of a sacred hammock , or is it a courtyard, and there… frames away, the moon rises with a kiln of air and fire; an explosion of my tight cocoon transcending the daze of this near weekend, of an evening's solemnity reflecting the languor from a nocturnal toil quieting my breath— ~ Farther on, contours of fireflies drift within a viscous space, gaily dancing without a pattern of thought , stirring my belly across a dune of moistened grass... I freeze. Somehow, as if to reel in their own environ they whiz psalmic songs upon this breast; halting and easing these weary summer hours as Friday redeems its grueling demands -- I freeze and inhale the remaining scent of half- light. .... Friday Feeling Contest of Silent One 3/10/2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 4:14:00 PM
Delightful poem, nette. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 3/12/2018 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your fine win.
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Date: 3/11/2018 2:45:00 PM
Hello Nette, good to see your win in the contest.'
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Date: 3/11/2018 1:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 3st place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:30:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations for your TOP win Nette...Great poem. Regards,Sathya
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Nette, I love the ending too :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 9:07:00 AM
I felt the Friday feeling in your poem, which has so many wonderful lines.. Congratulations on your third place in the contest..
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Date: 3/10/2018 8:31:00 AM
You got me when you approached the "sacred hammock". Once I make it to the hammock, nothing else matters. Lol. Beautifully written, nette. Now where's the adult beverage?
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Date: 3/10/2018 3:21:00 AM
It takes the roar of Friday to realize and feel the quiet after a hard weekend's work. Brilliantly worked out!
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Date: 3/9/2018 5:00:00 PM
You depicted this feeling of comfort on Fridays.. in your usual artistic style..lovely words..enjoyed..best for a win, nette.
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Date: 3/9/2018 12:40:00 PM
- Lovely written, Nette :) - Enjoy your Friday in a hammock ... relax - The hair you can wash tomorrow :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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