Serenity By Trial

Born without any legs, sweet Irene, a mother and wife, is serene. By accepting her plight, She does more than all right, Saying, “Handicapped? What do you mean?” “Though I’m legless,” she says, “I’m not bound to my bed because I get around! I move quite easily on a board made for me, and I push off with hands to the ground.” “People stare, for they think I’ve been burned by life,” says Irene, “but I’ve learned that for what I’ve gone through a great wisdom grew inside me, and blessings I’ve earned.” Written by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's Serenity Response Poetry Contest I chose. . . courage to change the things I can (actually this poem focuses on the entire Serenity prayer and not just that one line!)
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Davis Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Andrea What a heart touching and wonderful write about not letting a handicap or life get in the way of your future. Thank you for the great comment on my Do Not Fear poem. Yes, I believe it is entered in a contest.
Ball Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 1:45 PM
From one out of seven this gets a ten. What a terrific write. There is a man at work who was born this way and he gets around and does a great job. Super write. God Bless, JB
Arno Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Very moving. Enjoyed your write. Best regards, Jon
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 10:49 PM
Heartwarming story Andrea. Her attitude about life is awesome! Congratulations on a well deserved Ist place win! Love, Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 6:57 PM
makes me sigh..I do not have this much courage..I'm afraid ..actually yes! to even look at this much courage. Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 4:40 PM
congrats Andrea on a wonderful second place win for extraordinary lines of poetry for this contest.. a treasure trove of creativity luv..
Macfarlane Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 3:49 PM
Irene is an inspiration to us all.....great write....congarts on your win : )
B Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 10:26 AM
Indeed, tested through fire and wrought iron a blaze has made... a powerful and strong woman... by more rights than most. Very inspirational and well written poem Mrs. Andrea. Congratulations on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 9:51 AM
A very strong and determined woman of whom you write..Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Beck Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 8:04 AM
good poem ..... i like the tough woman in the story....although you speak abut her accepting her plight, i n fact she has not accepted i t as a plight at all....well done Andrea
Brown Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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January 26, 2012 at 4:20 AM
Many congrats on your superb win for the superb poem in the contest, loved bl
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:46 AM
Congratulations on your placement!! An inspiring story of overcoming challenges. Blessings, Rhonda
Susan Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 6:58 PM
awesome write Andrea! sends a great message and is entertaining too :)
Babcock Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 9:01 AM
A nice thoughtful write Andrea. love phyl
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January 20, 2012 at 12:53 AM
this is a heartfelt beautiful piece Andrea... i'm speechless
Horne Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Inspiring and beautiful piece, Andrea
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 9:25 AM
another level of creative genius Andrea.. so lovely and inspiring this story .. good luck in Nette's contest.. luv.. thankxx for reading my conversation for Frank... Ron was moved to tears typing it after I composed it..
Nair Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 7:56 AM
a beautifully composed write on an excellent topic, luv, jag
Rutherford Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Wow Andrea you have given a "handicapped person dignity and showed their courage in such a positive way . Kodos from me. This is a winner. Anne
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January 18, 2012 at 12:46 AM
Well written Andrea, and whats normal anyway..? this tells me that other people would be living more illusory lives than a person with this type of strength..!
Johnson Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 10:47 PM
what a game shiela, none braver ...
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January 17, 2012 at 9:30 PM
by the way, guys, I made up this person. But she represents MANY who have this affliction and now live normal and good lives.
Song Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 9:17 PM
soup mail again...lol.
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