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June- 11- 2026

Serenity Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

~ placed Second~

Serenity

“Serenity is more a state of mind, enhanced by the environment, but destroyed by disquieting circumstances. It is a feeling that transcends calm. In stillness when one is alone in nature’s benevolent lap, one can taste true serenity” ~ By Poet.

Sprawling relaxed on the carpet of grass
Looking up into the wide unending space of the sky
Here I lie with no nagging thoughts in my mind 
All I hear is the murmur of the wind passing by

The rustling leaves battle against the wind’s might
The moon peeps from behind the billowy clouds.
Stars shine like silver sequins on a flowing veil
Now I enjoy a lovely respite from the bustling crowds. 

Dew drops have dotted on the blades of grass
Giving a cooling sensation all over the skin
When I lie quiet, caught within nature’s clasp,
Ripples of peace and joy rise from within.

The stresses of life are left far behind
And a blissful quietude wraps me round.
It has bloomed here in this checkered shade,
Where peace and tranquility find their ground.

An all pervading serenity stills the thudding fear,
And whispers, "All is well, for those who believe."
We may not get peace from triumph’s fleeting glow,
But through nature’s quiet grace, it we receive. 

This is a great moment of tranquility that I enjoy
It isn't the absence of storm's booming might,
Nor a moment of bliss lowered down from above,
But a sheltered calm that fills the heart with light.
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Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:41 AM
Creative work you have penned in this winning work. Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 11:18 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win. Serenity is most often found in nature as you described so well here
Hind Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 11:12 PM
lovely <3
La France Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 9:57 AM
Valsa, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote and image ~
George Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 1:59 AM
Thanks a lot dear Constance for the placement given.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:52 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Serenity" write/quote again. Have a blessed day/week with your win...................
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 3:19 AM
Very well-penned poem with wonderful layers of imagery and fantastic wording. Valsa, I'm back with hearty congratulations on your contest win
Narain Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 11:08 AM
Natural serenity brings peace to mind. Excellent poem, Valsa ji.
DiMino Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 10:42 AM
"Stars shine like silver sequins on a flowing veil" -- love that! "a sheltered calm that fills the heart with light." -- Great writing, Valsa. Have a tranquil day. Blessings.
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Dear Valsa, like stepping into a sanctuary made entirely of light and breath. I love how you let the stained glass become a living presence. The way you move from the grass and sky into that deep, renewing stillness is so graceful. This is serenity, a kind of gentle awakening. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Your "Serenity" is a wonderful write/quote. What a peaceful/great picture you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this fun contest. Have a great/fun day writing away.............. .
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Experiencing nature firsthand is the best way to calm the mental and emotional being. Sending best wishes for this contest.
Cunningham Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 7:29 AM
Nothing beats being amongst nature to give you that feeling of serenity. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:08 AM
Wonderful poetry Valsa, takes the reader on a journey of Serenity… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 1:50 AM
Dear Valsa, your poem lulled me in perfect serenity. It is a marvelous piece of poetic lyric. Up to now I have no ideas on the subject. My mind will wander as a cloud. Don't know if it will arrive anywhere. Best for a win.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 1:40 AM
I decided to write something but yours is better.
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