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Serene Sunlover shines

Sun seeking sunflowers' stalks stand stylishly sleek
Bite birds, butterflies on beat before blazing blooms
Farm fields fire-up framing fascinating flourish
Gushing green grass giggle with girlish gaiety
Still soil sings soulful song to silent seeping saps
Reaper respectfully rallies with rapt rapture.

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/7/2024 9:20:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your Nursery Rhyme write. Have a fun day writing away............. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 11/7/2024 6:23:00 PM My dear friend, thank you for your kind visit and cheerful words. Thank you for the blessings. I am grateful to you for your precious time. cheers.

Jim Healey Date: 11/7/2024 3:34:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 11/7/2024 6:04:00 AM Thank you for this pleasant visit and cheerful words dear poet. I am grateful to you for your precious time. Blessings & cheers.

Karen Jones Date: 11/6/2024 3:25:00 PM Congrats on your first place win! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 11/7/2024 6:03:00 AM Thank you dear friend for returning with this happy words.I cherish your kind cheerful words. thank you. blessings.

John Read Date: 11/4/2024 12:19:00 PM Hi Thriveni, your Alliteration certainly shines. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 11/5/2024 7:14:00 PM Thank you dear poet. To get a line to one rhythm is a soldier's walk, I rather prefer a stroll. I tried this form for the first time dear poet. thank you.

Crystol Woods Date: 10/26/2024 9:47:00 AM Oh very good! Amazing, awesome alliteration! Xo Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 10/27/2024 12:37:00 AM I am grateful for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it. Thank you.

Silent One Date: 10/23/2024 12:53:00 PM Great alliteration dear.. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 10/27/2024 12:36:00 AM I am grateful for your kind visit and words dear poet. thank you.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/22/2024 1:19:00 PM great alliteration and some fun images in this one! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 10/27/2024 12:36:00 AM Thank you for this pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. Means so much to me. Thank you.

Maria Williams Date: 10/19/2024 8:38:00 PM They say 'less is more' Triveni' and your fine alliteration certainly says it all in so few a words. Maria Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 10/21/2024 1:59:00 AM Thank you for this pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. I am grateful for the support. Blessings & cheers.

Karen Jones Date: 10/18/2024 11:58:00 PM I am amazed at your alliteration skills! Great job saying so much with so little! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 10/21/2024 1:59:00 AM Thank you for your appreciation dear poet. I am grateful for your kind visit. Blessings & cheers.