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Serene Shells - Ty

Serene Dawn green Bluebells Seashells Serene skies reflect pastel dawn green As bluebell's path lines seashells pristine. 8/09/19 For 'Your Turn for a Tyburn' contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 7:09:00 PM

I read below to see what the sponsor said, and he is right. It was deserving of the higher win. Congrats, Michelle.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2019 7:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tyburn poem, Michelle :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 8/29/2019 6:07:00 AM

Michelle, this is a lovely Tyburn. I accidentally placed this wrong. I am so sorry. This should have placed 2nd. Please accept my apology I will try to contact administration. Thank you for entering my contest...I gave a 4th place rank to ONLY those who have not rhymed the first four words. IDK how this slipped by. Charlie

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/29/2019 3:36:00 PM

I appreciate knowing that, Charlie, thanks for placing me in your contest!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/17/2019 4:16:00 PM

I can actually see this beautiful scenery from your description, BRAVO!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 8/13/2019 1:14:00 AM

Delightfully penned! ;)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:28:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/12/2019 11:19:00 AM

what a beautiful image....i love nature, especially the beach....nicely painted :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:28:00 PM

I like the beach at dawn and sunset the best, thanks for commenting-

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/10/2019 11:36:00 AM

Nature just screams for poets to write poems about the wonder of nature - you have captured a true gem with your poetic creativity! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:26:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind comment, thank you, Jennifer!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/10/2019 9:08:00 AM

Such a pretty piece.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, Richard-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2019 8:49:00 PM

this is sure a pretty one. I love seashells.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:25:00 PM

I do too, especially since it rhymes with my name!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/9/2019 3:19:00 PM

Beautiful Michelle! I enjoyed this poem :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi'

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/9/2019 2:41:00 PM

Nature is such a gift and always inspires me to create poetry Michelle. This is a very lovely Tyburn that should do well in the contest! : ) xxoo

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 5:24:00 PM

This is my image of a little beach house at dawn, thanks for your comment!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/9/2019 2:25:00 PM

Oh, this is so exquisitely depicted, Michelle. It jumps from your canvas right into Nature! These are hard to do, and you have really penned a masterpiece. Voila! Best wishes, gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/9/2019 2:33:00 PM

I kept messing with this one, finally just stopped fighting it and let it be what it wanted to be, thanks for commenting!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2019 1:37:00 PM

- A pretty picture, Michelle - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/9/2019 2:20:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!