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Serene Sea

serene sea settles
seething sorrow of stressed souls---
sends Christ's “peace be still*.”

*Mark 4:39 And he arose, and rebuked the wind, and said unto the sea, Peace, be still. And the wind ceased, and there was a great calm.

Haiku in alliteration form
May 9, 2022    
2nd place, "Haiku Nature" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Sotto Poet; judged on 5/10/2022.

Copyright © Beata Agustin | Year Posted 2022

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Len Gasun Date: 5/13/2022 11:02:00 PM Back to Congratulate you on your splendid nature haiku poem dear friend! I realized this was under the theme of sound of silence. Again, Congratulations on your win! Hugs Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/12/2022 11:33:00 AM Congratulations and high fives Beata for your win. Your gift of alliteration shines in every line. And, I love your anchoring scripture. It must have been a jaw dropping experience for the disciples to watch the angry sea become a serene scene again! Blessings dear friend! Login to Reply

Jo Chamberlain Date: 5/11/2022 6:32:00 AM I enjoyed your Haiku I loved the S words you used, sounds really soothing. Congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2022 7:30:00 PM what a lovely message, Beata. Splendid!! Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/10/2022 7:06:00 AM "seething sorrow of stressed souls" - Great! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/10/2022 7:05:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love how you added Mark 4:39. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 5/10/2022 6:08:00 AM Beata, Congratulations on your winning placement in the Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it. Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 5/9/2022 10:46:00 PM Powerful and healing . I love the strength and beauty of this Beata ! Blessings, Susan :) Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 5/9/2022 8:39:00 PM There is peace and serenity in every writing of yours Beata ! Beautiful .... Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/9/2022 9:43:00 AM The Lord is good! Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 5/9/2022 9:31:00 AM I love the spiritual emphasis in your lovely nature haiku, Beata! And the verse reference, as well! :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/9/2022 7:00:00 AM A very stilled ocean is nice but it is not something that happens very much but thank God His Son stilled the waters. A miracle we can believe. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/9/2022 5:52:00 AM I can feel peace and freshness of soul in your beautiful haiku dear friend Beata. Thanks a lot for sharing along with the bible verse. I hope you will write another one for the haiku contest with 3 choices of topics. Please go and check if you have time. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs Login to Reply