Beata Agustin Poet Haiku

Serene Sea

serene sea settles
seething sorrow of stressed souls---
sends Christ's “peace be still*.”

*Mark 4:39 And he arose, and rebuked the wind, and said unto the sea, Peace, be still. And the wind ceased, and there was a great calm.

Haiku in alliteration form
May 9, 2022    
2nd place, "Haiku Nature" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Sotto Poet; judged on 5/10/2022.

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Len Gasun May 13, 2022 at 11:02 PM Back to Congratulate you on your splendid nature haiku poem dear friend! I realized this was under the theme of sound of silence. Again, Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Sam Kauffman May 12, 2022 at 11:33 AM Congratulations and high fives Beata for your win. Your gift of alliteration shines in every line. And, I love your anchoring scripture. It must have been a jaw dropping experience for the disciples to watch the angry sea become a serene scene again! Blessings dear friend!

Jo Chamberlain May 11, 2022 at 6:32 AM I enjoyed your Haiku I loved the S words you used, sounds really soothing. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2022 at 7:30 PM what a lovely message, Beata. Splendid!!

Christuraj Alex May 10, 2022 at 7:06 AM "seething sorrow of stressed souls" - Great! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith May 10, 2022 at 7:05 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love how you added Mark 4:39. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............

Sotto Poet May 10, 2022 at 6:08 AM Beata, Congratulations on your winning placement in the Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it.

Susan Lawrence May 9, 2022 at 10:46 PM Powerful and healing . I love the strength and beauty of this Beata ! Blessings, Susan :)

Valsa George May 9, 2022 at 8:39 PM There is peace and serenity in every writing of yours Beata ! Beautiful ....

Kim Rodrigues May 9, 2022 at 9:43 AM The Lord is good!

Laura Leiser May 9, 2022 at 9:31 AM I love the spiritual emphasis in your lovely nature haiku, Beata! And the verse reference, as well! :)

Sara Kendrick May 9, 2022 at 7:00 AM A very stilled ocean is nice but it is not something that happens very much but thank God His Son stilled the waters. A miracle we can believe. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Len Gasun May 9, 2022 at 5:52 AM I can feel peace and freshness of soul in your beautiful haiku dear friend Beata. Thanks a lot for sharing along with the bible verse. I hope you will write another one for the haiku contest with 3 choices of topics. Please go and check if you have time. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs