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Serene Meadow Premiere Contest Winner

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Written: March 14, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann *********************** On that obsidian night, I found your flawless face, echoing with illuminated breaths and hushed whispers from Mulberry Trees The sunset swan song lingers. in a warm twilight embrace. Springtime ushers in butterflies, dancing in a garden of flowers. The gentle breeze serves as music, and they flutter about for hours. Each butterfly dons its finest attire, softly adorned by the petals they cherish. Their movements are a ballet in the air adding beauty to the garden, a delightful sight so rare. Threads of turmoil dance across a colorful sky. Glimmering gazes gather, grinning at the edges with grace. From waves of sorrow to deep love, Break free and soar high. Graceful transience crossed my path, your porcelain pout spoke profound truths. I shuddered, sobbing and shrieking. The tattered threads tore apart. As we breathe in gentle impermanence, We draw sunlight with our breaths. A fractured mind finds restoration. as resilience blooms from the foundation. Carefree smiles, now bear marks, dimples etched by time hand, and a final stretch carved in a meadow so serene. The gravel path beneath our feet, worn and rugged through the years, bears witness to fading sparkles as daylight slowly slips away. Lucent lanterns of fireflies flicker upon ebony stems, scarlet petals soaked in the soft morning mist. My fist of frustration. clutched self-sabotaging shadows, resilience radiates through rooted in steadfast resolve. Ebony stalks with olive leaves Hold scarlet blossoms high. Desperation grasp weakens, releasing doubts into the soft azure sky. The sultry sun sinks behind it. racing storm-filled clouds, reflecting life’s ever-shifting kaleidoscope—our trials laid bare. We craft unframed dreams. from a hidden lattice unseen, built on unwavering hope where despair has often lingered. Sacred truths uphold support amid the sunset’s glare, embracing complexities — Love's chaotic dance is laid bare.

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Date: 3/30/2025 6:27:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 3/29/2025 5:52:00 AM
Big Congrats to win Top. Have Good Days.
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Date: 3/28/2025 8:22:00 PM
Delightful read. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/28/2025 6:06:00 PM
Great poem. Congratulations my friend.
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Date: 3/28/2025 3:37:00 PM
Achtung and Ach Du Lieber! This bad boy's a winner
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Date: 3/28/2025 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on another masterpiece and top trophy win Sotto!
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Date: 3/28/2025 1:22:00 PM
- Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Las :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/28/2025 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and first place. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away...........
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Date: 3/16/2025 9:08:00 AM
This is a lovely poem dealing with the complexities of love and its impact on human minds. Memories of joyful meetings in nature's exotic lap combine the beauty and the pain of love. How masterfully you describe the arrival of spring that comes to adorn nature with flowers and butterflies! This interlocking of memories and scenes from nature make this poem stand out. "Each butterfly dons its finest attire, softly adorned by the petals they cherish. Their movements are a ballet in the air adding beauty to the garden, a delightful sight so rare." Lovely description! This is just one among the many. Altogether a wonderful poem. All the best dear Lasaad.
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Date: 3/15/2025 5:10:00 PM
SP, this does speak volumes about the complexity of love. You cover the feeling as well as the turmoil people may feel. The image of a flawless face yields to all sorts of realities. Relationships are not easy and they do leave a significant imprint on our memories. Hope you are well and in good shape with all love. Smiles!!
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Date: 3/15/2025 1:32:00 PM
A marvellous poem that stirs the soul. Always your poems show excellence verse.
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Date: 3/15/2025 11:23:00 AM
- As always a wonderful poem, which almost takes my breath away :) - The verses are richly described in beauty, Las :)- Best wishes :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/14/2025 6:19:00 PM
Breathtaking work, Sotto Poet. :) The end says so much in accordance with all those beautiful images.
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