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Serenading Perspective

Scanter hours of daylight during fall.  Without your grace, I’d not be here at all.  Lilies can smell dew in the countryside.  Sitting on the green and resting side-by-side. The Quahog calm has a clear few worries.  For so long, a rock amid the din or hurries  He gets his thrills by screening krill.  One gram daily is his sinful thrill. If nature calls, one must jump on the phone.  You can lose everything you own.  If you do not, you will miss your chance.  Or you will wet your pants from the circumstance. The beauty of nature is publicly available.  Most men shun it solely, as it's predictable.  trees that were plunged and ridden.  Daily fauna injuries stay hidden.   Despite my wishes, I could not reach the moon.  Smoke over the sea rose too soon.  I must swap roses for weeds.  How love burns by planting seeds. Our plates float and collide.  My failure threads tremble and chide.  making my shoulders shrug in unison.  While my oceans churn like a hooligan.
Written: October 31, 2022
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George Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 6:58 PM
This is so very creative, dear Lasaad and written in great language with beautiful rhyming. But I wonder if this will serve the purpose of a nursery rhyme.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful lines that define the beauty of nature Sotto. Well done! ~ Belle
Buehler Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 11:40 AM
I was captivated by the depth and beauty of your amazing poem, Lasaad. This is wonderful poetry. Evelyn :)
Ball Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 9:08 AM
This speaks of the beauty of nature that surrounds us all. Loved it Lasaad. Good job. You put a lot of thought into this one. God Bless, JB
Fowler Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 8:14 AM
This is certainly creative Lasaad, with superb imagery and language. :) Linda
Trifiatis Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Outstanding imagery and language usage, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Deeply introspective dialogue my friend. Much to gleam from your perspective in this write.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 12:08 AM
Harry is right. A string of nursery rhymes. But adults would love them too.
Horsman Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Oh this is so good, Lasaad. Each stanza a stand alone, yet a wonderful complete poem.. Harry
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