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As the golden orb descends in the ocean, It radiates the clouds in an auburn hue The azure waves smile with a joyful motion, While humming a serene love tune The pelicans head on a journey to their home, While bidding the day a tender adieu The sapphire waves beam with a pleasing motion, While enjoying the gorgeous milieu Twinkling stars rush to brighten the darkness, Filling up the skies with a mystic view The indigo waves grin with a heavenly motion, While kissing the sandy shore to woo She appreciates the panorama with a grateful heart, Smiling at Mother Nature’s charm anew The cerulean waves leer in blissful emotion, While touching her feet softly through

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Date: 2/24/2024 2:50:00 AM
What a lovely sunset you have painted. It is so heavenly to be by the seaside in the evening when "The indigo waves grin with a heavenly motion, While kissing the sandy shore to woo" Enjoyed your beautifully rhyming poem and the lovely landscape you have painted, dear Smita!
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 3/3/2024 9:08:00 AM
Thanks, Valsa! Ocean sunsets are always divine for me. Thank for your lovely comments.
Date: 2/22/2024 6:31:00 PM
ever so gentle and soothing to my soul, thanks for sharing, I love this
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2024 11:28:00 AM
I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for you visit!

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