Seraphs Hibernal Wasteland

She peers at captivation
Moon swindling her frore heartbeat
Beams tearing the soul outward
She stands firm with ground

Wings sprout out, after ice thaws 
Whispering desolation
Whirls around her and she cuts 
The emotion out

Forgive her please, if you will,
For she only spreads her wings 
For those who can captivate
As well as this moon

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For: Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dream Weaver's contest "Dodoitsu Darkness"
By: Tim 09/19/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/28/2011 11:15:00 AM
Tim this is a beautiful expression of great visuals and vibrant lines of creativity luv.. seeing those wing spans for sure ..they protect and defend.. for He has given His Angels charge over thee..oh.
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Date: 9/25/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:29:00 PM
Good winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:13:00 PM
Congrats Tim on a super second place win my friend with awesome poetry luv..
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:36:00 PM
dang... meant enlightenmeNt...
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:42:00 PM
dig the moon... not understanding the frore.. mighty sweet. ~N
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Nancy Jones
Date: 9/19/2011 10:33:00 PM
ahso! great word indeed, thanks for the enlightenmet!
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Tim B
Date: 9/19/2011 9:48:00 PM
frore = "frore [frawr, frohr] adjective Archaic . frozen; frosty." :) Had no idea what it was either until I happened upon it in the thesaurus. Great word, FRORE!
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