Brian Strand Poet Lanterne

Sequence-Sensations

A
famous
work of art-
drive ambitions
part,
a
moving
story-line
travels down our
spine-
to
flowers
of the field,
heart-filled beauty
yields-
on
love's sure
foundation-
a family 
builds

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Sara Kendrick October 4, 2009 at 4:21 PM Interesting work here. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara

Constance La France October 4, 2009 at 8:37 AM I love the flow of these words, one wants to rush, and then must go back again. You are as always, an inspiration.

Elaine George October 4, 2009 at 4:12 AM Definitly a sequence of beautiful sensations. Thank you for sharing, Brian. Lainie

Robin L. Gass October 4, 2009 at 3:52 AM I love how this sequence flows, Brian. This is filled with such wonderful sentiment! Love, Robin

P Sheart October 3, 2009 at 7:37 AM Beautiful sentiments Brian. Love the words, on love's ure foundation...Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Carrie Richards October 3, 2009 at 7:36 AM Oh my,.... I do believe this is one of my very favorites, ever, from your poetry! Truly beautiful....straight into my favorites...! Just wonderful! ~ Great work, Brian!! ~ Carrie