Home » Poems » Brian Strand » Sequence Scale - Beam

Sequence Scale - Beam

When all is in balance- everythings well- if all is amiss and askew,except you- then glowing well-being's- a story you'll tell

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/11/2009 1:46:00 AM

Brian i reckon those are words of truth - Inner peace does carry its own glow - God Bless you, MJ

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/10/2009 2:16:00 PM

sometimes i try to find that ballance on my oun. and sometimes it's just there. you know the feeling. nice write. john h loving iii

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/10/2009 1:28:00 PM

Nothing as wonderful as when things are right with the world! :) Well done, loved this! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/10/2009 12:10:00 PM

Inner peace is a beautiful thing and simply exudes from a person like a glow. An interesting and thoughtful write. Lovely. Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/10/2009 8:12:00 AM

This is wonderful Brian. There is much wisdom in these few words. "if all is amiss and askew, except you" is a brilliant line. Memories of when I possessed calmness in very difficult situations do stand out in my mind. There is bit of the philosopher among your other talents, Brian. Well said!