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A May tree- underneath stinging nettle, a wild flower- harmony in blossom and petal

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2009 11:05:00 PM

A beautiful image, Brian!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/9/2009 6:24:00 PM

Nature has its surprises and moments only you repeat.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/9/2009 2:11:00 PM

Another beautiful HOT poetry. Congrats and Thank you for your warm comment. Ernilando

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/8/2009 8:50:00 PM

I love a wild flower harmony in blossom and petal! Simply magnificent and beautiful. To see the world through your eyes would be a worthwhile trip! Thank you kindly for your comments always appreciated.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/8/2009 11:30:00 AM

The giver gives and the poem gives some more ... a perfect picture of beauty found sometimes before the very fear of pain. Bravo again.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/8/2009 10:26:00 AM

I would just go crazy over such a beautiful sight. You painted it well! Love, Shar

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/8/2009 9:06:00 AM

A pretty lanterne in shape of tree, and abeautiful picture you paint with so few words! Well done Brian, smiles, Anna-Marie.

David Smalling

Date: 5/8/2009 7:07:00 AM

This form works so wel for you ... it elevates your genius as much as your genius elevates it ... vivid imageries that I like

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/8/2009 6:28:00 AM

A very vivid picture Brian - God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/8/2009 6:24:00 AM

So lovely....a day brightener!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/8/2009 4:28:00 AM

This is great...loved it!