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Light flotsam particles caught in the beam, dust to dust, skin on wing- a transient dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/10/2010 5:39:00 PM
Interesting idea about dust...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/10/2010 7:38:00 AM
You are one to write in the softest, gentle way, on the simple things in life. Another jewel!
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Date: 3/10/2010 4:48:00 AM
Now Lanterne is a different story for me Brian ..just read your blog on Sonnet poetry and though they elude me the Lanterne it exciting to me to condense a thought into so few words... like this one from u I so enjoyed..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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