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Sequence-Time Stands Still

Thin spires in the breeze- tasselled teasels touch bells tolling in the wind- old memories- die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 7:09:00 PM
your title reflects nicely in this art! Brian!... jim
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Date: 10/8/2009 11:24:00 AM
This was a lovely poem Brian......:JP]
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Date: 10/7/2009 8:03:00 AM
Softly melancholy this one feels....lovely and rather sad. ~ Nicely done. Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/7/2009 4:18:00 AM
Will they come to life again? Keep writing Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2009 1:33:00 AM
What a vivid picure you paint with this one, Brian. lainie
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