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Sequence-The Nature of Things

For Spring warmth to unlace, Winter must lose face- for wholeness and shalom, all egos be gone For more see John 3:3-6

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Date: 3/4/2009 12:15:00 PM
Great use of rhyme with unlace and face. I wish I had written this. Well done. Thanks for your comments I always appreciate them. I'm proud to enter your contest. I like the concept. Regards, Gerasrd.
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Date: 3/2/2009 3:59:00 PM
So lovely in form a the message is perfect. Awesome work, Brian! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/2/2009 9:15:00 AM
Yes indeed, so beautifully written. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:43:00 AM
Beautiful and so much truth and good advice told in this short poem. ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/2/2009 3:07:00 AM
Indeed, only one way. brillaint, I just love your lanterne sequenses. love, Kristin
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