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Sequence-Symbol Signs

Daisy and nettle, poppy petal, willow weeds..symbol life's deeds- pain and innocence, forsaken love- tragedy lies beneath death's sheaf

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/25/2009 12:27:00 PM

That last line is something that I wish that I had written. Thank you for the prize. I am reading them now. You are quite atalent, sir, aand your contst are both a challenge and a joy to enter. Thank you always for your time and remarks. Regards, Gerard.

James Peranteau

Date: 7/25/2009 7:16:00 AM

Brian,..your writes are addictive ! I must go now though. Great Cinqku my friend ! I pray that strenght is with you Brian. Your poetry leaves this reader ,..with the desire to hurry back home and swallow more ! TY james

Cecil Hickman

Date: 7/23/2009 5:56:00 PM

as always your talent shows in the words that you extend and place so carefully and strategically,, a wonderful piece which shows both sides of life,,,Thank you for reading and commenting on my words,,blessings..Cecil

Amber Plocica

Date: 7/22/2009 12:15:00 PM

Hi Brian I had to look up the word sheaf in my dictionary. LOL This was a beautiful yet sad poem. I'm 11 I'm new here, and I LOVE YOUR POEM! X's and O's - Amber <3

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/21/2009 1:41:00 PM

Very interesting Cinqku. Very deeo, bill