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Love's little song- three quatrains, and couplet long, in compact verse and rhyme; stands the test of time- with light grace poetry in life,face to face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 1/9/2010 5:39:00 PM
Applause applause. I gotta put in favs JUST BECAUSE it's about my favorite poetry form ever!! (glad you liked my limerick. It could take me a month to post a limerick a day here!) andrea
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Date: 1/9/2010 12:49:00 PM
I love this Lanterne sequence Sonnet. And Brian thanks for the help on the concluding Couplet. Smile. I've tried my luck on a single Lanterne. Check it out if you find the time. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/9/2010 10:49:00 AM
You remind us to try other forms....this is a wonderful example of a lanterne...I must start writing more variations in this new year. ~Best regards, Brian, Carrie
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:38:00 AM
Have never written a Lanterne, Brian. Will have to soon! Looks a bit challenging but fun! I'll give it a try. Thanks again for the lesson, Brian. And thank you for your kind comments. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:37:00 AM
Nice......... I really like this style.... You have read them I believe.... Smooth in your approach.... AWESOME.....:JP]
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Date: 1/9/2010 7:15:00 AM
brian you are becoming an idol to follow in the footsteps in writing you so remind me of joesph spence loved the flow and pattern used here thanks for another valuble lesson
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Date: 1/9/2010 6:45:00 AM
I have only written two, and both were of loss and regrets. Maybe that is why I have only written two. Most of my poetry, with the exception of concrete, sometimes not even that, are not pre-hought or planned. I just pour whatever comes out and then edit it. The example shown under poetry forms here at the soup are a prime example of what your sequence implies. You continue to teach and inspire. I thank you. Lainie
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Date: 1/9/2010 5:19:00 AM
Interesting write about the sonnet. It sounds like it would be easy but none of them are easy. Writing poetry by strick method is not easy. Sara
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