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Sequence-Sonnet

Love's
little song-
three quatrains,
and  couplet 
long,
in
compact
verse and rhyme;
stands the test of
time-
with
light grace
poetry
in life,face to 
face

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2010 5:39:00 PM

Applause applause. I gotta put in favs JUST BECAUSE it's about my favorite poetry form ever!! (glad you liked my limerick. It could take me a month to post a limerick a day here!) andrea

John Freeman

Date: 1/9/2010 12:49:00 PM

I love this Lanterne sequence Sonnet. And Brian thanks for the help on the concluding Couplet. Smile. I've tried my luck on a single Lanterne. Check it out if you find the time. Sincerely, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/9/2010 10:49:00 AM

You remind us to try other forms....this is a wonderful example of a lanterne...I must start writing more variations in this new year. ~Best regards, Brian, Carrie

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2010 8:38:00 AM

Have never written a Lanterne, Brian. Will have to soon! Looks a bit challenging but fun! I'll give it a try. Thanks again for the lesson, Brian. And thank you for your kind comments. Peace, Audrey

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/9/2010 8:37:00 AM

Nice......... I really like this style.... You have read them I believe.... Smooth in your approach.... AWESOME.....:JP]

Katherine Stella

Date: 1/9/2010 7:15:00 AM

brian you are becoming an idol to follow in the footsteps in writing you so remind me of joesph spence loved the flow and pattern used here thanks for another valuble lesson

Elaine George

Date: 1/9/2010 6:45:00 AM

I have only written two, and both were of loss and regrets. Maybe that is why I have only written two. Most of my poetry, with the exception of concrete, sometimes not even that, are not pre-hought or planned. I just pour whatever comes out and then edit it. The example shown under poetry forms here at the soup are a prime example of what your sequence implies. You continue to teach and inspire. I thank you. Lainie