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Sequence-See Saw

Sometimes I think- sometimes I am Oftimes I dream- more often I plan In the spur of the moment- catch,as catch can My heart rules my head- and fearless I shed Reticence,buried deep- in impetuosity,I leap Waiting...I.., I....t .. h .. i .. n...k..? - inhibits......I am

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/7/2009 5:16:00 AM

good one, I like a little spontaneity!!

Elaine George

Date: 12/6/2009 5:19:00 PM

The many layers of who we are. Fastinating poem and blog, Brian. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2009 4:57:00 AM

Luv this one Brian.. just read your blog too and I see your thought pattern here... great words to draw the reader to want more... will comment on blog also.. excellent info on it... always... happy Sunday with blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2009 12:51:00 AM

Interesting perspective in this write, Brian. We have heard the quote, "I think, therefore I am." But if I am reading this correctly, perhaps we sometimes think too much and fail to enjoy each moment of our lives. Very intriguing concepts. Love, Carolyn