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Sequence-Ruach

When you rest upon me- your heart I can see When you rest upon me- I can bend the knee When you rest upon me- then I can be free When you rest upon me- then I can be me When you rest upon me- close am I to thee Then your word I can say- in another way Inspired by Num 11:24/24 & 29

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Inkstain Thepoet

Date: 11/11/2009 9:32:00 AM

I just utterly adore your poem dedicated to religion. They are powerful. Loved this poem and I feel like I really don't have to tell you to continue writing as I can see your pen is always on the move. Nice write Brian.

Marty Owens

Date: 11/8/2009 8:14:00 PM

Very Nice, enjoyed reading...Marty

Elaine George

Date: 11/5/2009 6:08:00 PM

Rauch (Spirit, wind, breath). Sayeth Moses "I wish that all the Lord's people were profits and that the Lord would put his spiit on them. BRILLIANT PIECE! Brian. Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2009 3:28:00 PM

Inspiring write. Keep writing. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/5/2009 7:26:00 AM

Inspirational, and a wonderful read to begin my morning. Lovely words to live by. ~ Carrie