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Poems imagined, verses refined leaving reality behind?.. maybe.. the poets self expression flying free,declared for all- to see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/17/2008 3:15:00 AM
I loved this, it's so relevant and sweet. :D Also thank you for your comment about my couplet. It really helped, thanks. Nathaniel
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Date: 10/16/2008 12:00:00 AM
Loved this cinqku, Brian. Relevant and perfectly penned. BTW - thank you for your congrats on MY poem OBD'S, however you thanked "Kristin" in your comment on my poem, not me... a Freudian slip...? Anyway, I wish you all the best...although I haven't been commenting as much as I should...I appreciate and read everything you write and keep you in my thoughts. You're a very special poet/artist...Peace always. John
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Date: 10/12/2008 10:23:00 AM
This was very deep write. Superb ending. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/12/2008 5:57:00 AM
Flying free - yes, how our words set us free. Incredible write. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/12/2008 5:06:00 AM
Yes! thank goodness for poetry!!!!!!! Amen, well said. Love Kristin
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Date: 10/12/2008 3:55:00 AM
This is a great write Brian - I just loved the ending for those certainly are words of truth - God Bless
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Date: 10/12/2008 2:06:00 AM
ah! a poem afloat.. hehe! Brgds. George
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