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which is sea, which is sky- do horizons lie? as I move, it moves too, etched a deeper blue should I stop, change about, find another route ? can I gain certainty- who will set me free sky or sea, onwards let my horizons be

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Date: 10/19/2009 2:21:00 PM
Thankyou very much for your comments tooday Brian, I enjoy reading your poetry very much. Kate. x
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Date: 10/14/2009 9:25:00 AM
Memorable sequence, Brian! I am amazed at your work! This is challenging. Peace, audrey
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Date: 10/14/2009 7:57:00 AM
Love this sequence, and the mystery it seems to hold...the seaching we all do! Looking for our own horizons....nice!!! PS. Congratulations once again for your winning poem in the Poetry Soup Contest!!! Excellent!! _love, Carrie
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:44:00 AM
Lovely and thought provoking Fibinacci sequence, Brian! I especially love the last lines. Love, Robin
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:12:00 AM
Unusual style fibonacci. Keep writing. Sara
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