Sequence-Once Burnt

Can time assuage broken hearts- and ignite passion once more or will despair overwhelm forever, stifling- love's flame

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2009 12:34:00 PM

Brian, time can mend broken hearts...over and over again. Nice job! Carolyn

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/13/2009 2:30:00 AM

Truthfully, it could ge either way, most of the time...out. very sad, love, Kristin

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/12/2009 1:14:00 PM

Great form, great age-old question! I should like to think the heart can, and evenutally would, recover. Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/12/2009 6:45:00 AM

I reckon thats about the hardest call we face in life - I do horribly when alone with a broken heart - God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/12/2009 6:33:00 AM

A beautiful Fibonacci with a question to ponder. I suppose it depends on how deep the wounds are, however I remain optimistic and hopeful that time shall heal. Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/12/2009 6:14:00 AM

This is beautiful, Brian, in both form and sentiment. I believe it can. With time, we heal. With Christ in your heart there is always love there and it is easy to love. Great write, Brian

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/12/2009 4:46:00 AM

It better not stifle. Love the form and the clear flowing message within this write. Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/12/2009 3:42:00 AM

Time will heal all wounds..The heart shall love again..Love this form.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/12/2009 3:19:00 AM

Brian I havent seen this form before. The words I love great job. Laurie

Arany P.

Date: 2/12/2009 2:30:00 AM

lovely! ~ Arany