Sequence-On the Left Field

a spice of madness- flavours genius as in ageing bodies- adolescence lives on

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Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2009 11:27:00 PM

a wonderful and creative write Brian...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/30/2009 6:26:00 PM

A few in my family fit this example of adolescence in the mind....(perhaps not of the body)...but isn't it wonderful to be young, and free spirited in mind and heart? Love this! ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2009 4:54:00 PM

Definitely in our imagination. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/30/2009 11:47:00 AM

Im smiling...you are right on...In my case..its trying to live on..BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2009 9:35:00 AM

Such powerful words from your pen today Brian in this monoku poem.. deep ..very deep .. the meaning is pure and true... thankxxx for sharing this going to my favs right now... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/30/2009 2:37:00 AM

Ahhhh yes Brian . I know the feeling , when the spirit is willing , but the flesh .... well the flesh is wrinkled !! . Not sure that I want to be a giddy teen again , but boy , it was good . Great piece and well presented ...