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Sequence-Light My Fire

When sun sets, night descends, who,can our life mend From on high, in the sky, Morning Star we spy- As day breaks shadows flee, in His light,we see, The Dayspring, eternal life,with trust,can bring

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Date: 12/11/2009 7:35:00 AM
I feel a deep spirituality here, a profound social commentary, and human sense of contentment. Bravo
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Date: 12/10/2009 2:58:00 PM
Breathtaking poem here, Brian. Wow...this is a keeper! I need to print this out! Thank you for sharing such lovely words. ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/10/2009 2:05:00 PM
Such beautiful ... most lovely .. words I ever read.. I appreciate and thankxxx so much for choosing my poem as an Honorable Mention... enjoy the challenge u put forth for us here on the Soup.. always enjoy the blogs too... again, thankxxx .. am feverishly working on your new contest... hope to have an entry soon... luv.. blessings... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:44:00 AM
Love this one for subtility of faith that I see. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:00:00 AM
Excellent and very Beautiful. Very bright and lovely hopes for His light which comes after every dark night and that too in few words only. Great. Thanks for a lovely poem. I have also placed few Natures, Love and other poems. Hope you would like to go through them. I shall be waiting for your comments. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 12/10/2009 6:37:00 AM
Brian you will forever be the master of these short poems - I just don't know how you do it - Simply amazing - Merry Christmas and God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/10/2009 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful in its simplicity yet powerful and filled with faith! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments on my works~Mary
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Date: 12/10/2009 3:15:00 AM
Your creativity is really being demonstrated in this piece. Excellent write.
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