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Sequence-For Old Sake's Sake

The beauty of seasons as they fallow lie- so quiet, like a grave, the old year will die.. to become history, moulders into dust.. and begin once again- as hope turns to trust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/29/2008 3:03:00 PM
Great job Brian - Such a Blessing to know you - God bless, MJ
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:47:00 AM
So beautifully written Brian. The cycle continues from earth to all animals, including many of us. Sorry I am late with comments, bad back. Trying to catch up here. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:02:00 PM
Very nice verse, positive, regenerative, renewing as the winter should be. Does Latern form always use "no cap's" Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 12/28/2008 9:13:00 AM
Such a hopefilled poem, the perfect start of a new year, is to trust that it will bring good things. I loved this poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/28/2008 4:53:00 AM
New Year brings new hope, desires, and goal that will ultimately be gained or left on the side of the road to die. Another wonderful job brother
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Date: 12/28/2008 2:50:00 AM
What a perfect sequence for the end/beginning of the year. amazing, and so beautiful. May you be blesse always, Kristin
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