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Sequence-Confluence

It is there, yet it is not, flowing,never still- to and fro to the sea, wanders where it will.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2010 2:12:00 PM
good work, ennoyed today.
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Date: 1/17/2010 11:13:00 AM
SOUP MAIL Brian.. wonderful Lanterne... very nice flow to it... LMB....
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:45:00 AM
I'll have to check out this form sometime. You do it quite nicely, Brian! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:36:00 AM
I liked this piece, it does leave a lot to the imagination.
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Date: 1/17/2010 3:59:00 AM
Interesting write. This one is open-ended because it could be anything or people or animals or organization. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Ownership". Not a happy write but a necessity of life. Sara
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