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Sequence-Confession

Just looking,I see- pictures,intuitively By reading,perceive- as images deceive In writing,I express- syllbles and stress When painting,depart- off colour-wheel art Sadly ,Fall tints are not there- no matter how hard I stare Most reds upon green- are not part of my scene

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/20/2009 9:19:00 AM

A painting in poetic monoku... great ideas in this poem Brian... enjoyed... happy Sunday... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/19/2009 9:39:00 AM

Hope this doesn't mean you don't enjoy Christmas, Brian. Wanted to thank you for introducing me to new forms of poetry this year and wish you happy holidays, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 12/19/2009 8:12:00 AM

Brian, so much food for thought in this insightful Monoku. Gets one to deeply thinking about art and what inspires one to paint, write through perspective. Excellent! Love Light Patricia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2009 3:54:00 AM

Finding the correct color word to describe what one sees is very hard. Also I find when I take a picture of a scene and really wanting to capture the color, it never turns out like I would like it to turn out. You have aptly described the topic. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Thanks for choosing my work for honorable mention. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara