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Sequence-Clasped Together

The 
softness
of a palm,
that brings inner
calm-
the
feel of
finger tips,
sensitive as 
lips-
hands
gently
interlink
words,the other
thinks

Inspired by Rodin's The Cathedral
http://www.sculpturegallery.com/sculpture/la_cathedrale.html

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/24/2009 4:08:00 AM
So beautifully written Brian. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:27:00 PM
Creative presentation in words of a sculpture by Rodin, Brian. Happy Thanksgiving to you! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:48:00 PM
So lovely in a breathtakingly, soft way. Enjoyed this one! :) Carrie
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Date: 11/23/2009 6:06:00 AM
Interesting soulmate Lanterne, Brian. Sensitive and romantic. - Robert
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:41:00 AM
Quite romantic in your write Brian .. enjoyed this one immensely... thankxxx for the website info too.. very informative .. appreciated so much.. luv .. happy holidays... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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