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Sequence-Brief Beauties

Like rockets in the sky- delphiniums blaze their upward revelry- spires of colour, sleek My latest contest LIGHT MY FIRE is for this lanterne form either in original 5 lines or exteded sequence thereof as above

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2009 5:06:00 AM

So, this is what a Lanterne is all about Brian. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. I must say this one is beautiful. Love, Carol

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/29/2009 10:45:00 AM

This poem is a beauty Brian, lovely imager, that you always show with your chosen words. Good luck in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/29/2009 8:56:00 AM

Style and grace are your trademarks, Brian. Thank you for always introducing me to new verse forms. This one contains a uniquely colorful image! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2009 6:47:00 AM

This sounds fun and a great new challenging contest Brian. (I think you would win your own contest with this great Lanterne!)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/29/2009 4:27:00 AM

sounds good, Brian! I 'll sharpen my pencil!!! beautiful write... jim