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Sequence-A Poet's Lament

A crackle of dead wood- an unfinished book, as driftwood on the strand, beginnings no end- in timeless tedium of paralysed thought

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 7:25:00 PM
I don't believe it for a second! Brian! good work! jimbo
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Date: 8/27/2009 1:10:00 AM
That is bad to have paralized thought. I like the crackle of dead wood and the unfinished book. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:31:00 PM
Jungle time, Smile, Witty, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:20:00 PM
nice description on poetry
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Date: 8/26/2009 1:41:00 PM
excellent write---crackle of wood--unfinished book--paralysed thought--awesome--charma
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Date: 8/26/2009 1:15:00 PM
Oh my, this describes that terrible place that I frequently go..paralysed thought..great phrase. BG
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:28:00 AM
Awwwww Brian, hope it is not of you which you speak in your poem. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:16:00 AM
I know this place...this state of mind. Well penned, Brian! Love, Donna
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Date: 8/26/2009 8:08:00 AM
Very good piece Brian..this one shook my insides...excellent work.
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Date: 8/26/2009 7:57:00 AM
Such an apt description of that place that all writers dread.....adrift in a sea of paralysed thought. Well said, Brian!!
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