Sequence- Ides of March

murmurs of silvered petal- willows waving in the wind soaring over the cornfield- an exaltation of larks

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2010 9:23:00 AM

Lovely visuals and imagery Brian.. I felt like flying too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

David Byrne

Date: 2/28/2010 9:10:00 PM

love the title of this one!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 9:57:00 AM

Somehow, I thought this might be about Caesar, but you deliver a wonderfully painted picture and grace the reader with an uplifting scene. Very nice, Brian. Love, Carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 5:49:00 AM

can picture it!

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/28/2010 3:28:00 AM

As another famous Bard said ; Beware !!! On a Twickers note ; Has Lady Luck got Green fingers ???? She sure had yesterday , and she would never shave with a " Wilkinson " sword !!!