Septolet

Eyes
meet briefly
as we dance
with another.

Cheeks 
flushed hot
disclose secret desires.


Randy Steele
Dr. Ram Mehta's Septolet Contest

lovepassionromanceverse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 20, 2011 at 11:47 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Randy. Love, Carol

Joseph Osita

July 20, 2011 at 1:03 AM

Very beautiful! Congrats on your big win

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2011 at 7:40 PM

This reminds me of the way I met my husband! Very nicely done and WON.

Elaine George

July 19, 2011 at 7:30 PM

Lovely Septolet, Randy. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Black Eyed Susan

July 19, 2011 at 4:33 PM

ooooh. how sensual. very nice! congratulations on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 19, 2011 at 3:50 PM

Congrats Randy on a great win for a wonderful romantic poem luv..enjoy...

Sara Kendrick

July 19, 2011 at 3:26 PM

Congrats...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 19, 2011 at 2:51 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Randy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 16, 2011 at 8:52 PM

wow Randy u wrote exactly what I am currently feeling luv.. making this a new favorite for the "Sweetheart".. excellent entry ..good luck in the contest with this blazing brilliance luv..