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September's Lingered Whispers

~ The sunrise serenades a sleepy distant horizon in sweet echoed harmonies, swept softly on a cool breeze of September’s lingered whispers across an autumn watercolor sky singing I love you… hoping to find your smile ~

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/13/2019 8:13:00 AM

Very pretty indeed

Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 8:44:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you. :)

Hello There

Date: 9/12/2019 8:34:00 PM

Another pretty piece ~

Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/12/2019 6:51:00 PM

Sunrise serenade so peaceful sounding, I think you wrote one called sunrise sonata a while back, any way loved this one. Hey Chris have you seen the new show song land? Where artists get to perform and pitch their song to other singers who are looking for songs. I was thinking about your Kiss Goodbye I still say it should be on the radio!

Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thanks so much John. I have seen the show and I really enjoy it. Ha, I'm not so sure about that. It would mean me getting up there and performing it, not sure that would work out to well but I appreciate you saying so.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/12/2019 11:42:00 AM

Ok see.... ? Alright not going to argue the point even if the point is your poems are truly amazingly beautiful! Thank you once again for allowing the ride on your words to be in the moment! Which could have been really odd if it was a sexy write! Lmao! Still slaying it chris!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 11:55:00 AM

That might have been odd. : ) Thanks so much Brenda, I am happy you liked this one. Just writing what comes to mind hoping to create a few smiles.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/12/2019 10:08:00 AM

So musical, Chris. I started humming "September Song" and "Moonlight Serenade.

Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 10:13:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend. Did you get my soupmail yesterday?

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/12/2019 9:00:00 AM

within those words it surely sounds like you found her smile...love the painted canvas of your words in this one, just gorgeous my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 9:02:00 AM

It is always brighter in my world when she smiles, so perhaps I have. Thank you Sandy, always your words make me smile.