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Twenty four dead roses Heat waves and reposes No one knows what never was Autumn breezes sing in melancholy hues Flowers dance around paupers grave Buried now yet never saved From life's despair or a loving hand Sadness is the graves last grand stand Loneliness lost in cobbled stone alleys No one sees the empty tear Anxiety knifes the lonely mans fear Autumn winds chant yet no one hears Four and score and long ago Childhood memories in rivers flow Now dry and scorched on withered page Dead poets lost in the mind of a sage

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Melissa Tracy

Date: 12/2/2017 10:15:00 AM

Such a captivating emotional piece! Beautiful write!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/19/2017 8:38:00 PM

Your beautifully written poem Arthur, has a melancholic and haunting quality to it.., it's so emotionally stirring and sad in such a deep, lovely and poetic way...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:54:00 PM

Thank you very much Susan.

Jean Murray

Date: 10/8/2017 5:15:00 PM

Another masterpiece from the mind of a sage.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:53:00 PM

Thank you Jeannie! hugs

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 10/8/2017 10:55:00 AM

A masterpiece of writing from your very talented quill, Arthur! My kind of poetry. Glad you enjoyed the Old Retired Guys write. (I'm one of those guys since I'll be 87 come 29 Oct!) thx as always for your kind comments - Bob H

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:53:00 PM

Thank you very much Robert!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2017 9:24:00 PM

ohhh, this tearing poem stirs my soul as your beautiful pen bleeds with depth, arthur... huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thank nette hugs right back!

Joseph May

Date: 10/7/2017 9:24:00 PM

This is a great write Arthur..a fave...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Jospeh

Tim Smith

Date: 10/7/2017 10:14:00 AM

Dry sage smolders to cleanse away the bad spirits...an old Indian tradition...great poem

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thanks Tim!

Sara Ella

Date: 10/7/2017 8:50:00 AM

I love reading this poem out loud - it has a flowing grace. You've paired your wonderful poem with a beautiful picture and despite the sad tone, your poem brings a smile :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/7/2017 7:06:00 AM

Arthur, there are so many beautiful images in your poem that paint the sadness of endings. I especially like the first stanza.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Agnes.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2017 6:28:00 AM

This is such a fabulous write my friend! Yes, it is quite a sad subject you write about however! I hope there is healing within your heart! These troubling times are rough, but we can make it if we stick together! I truly enjoyed reading your amazing poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Russell.

Darren White

Date: 10/7/2017 3:56:00 AM

The end of September celebrated. Although it may sound anxious, in fact autumn brings beautiful colours to distract us, give us happy thoughts :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:50:00 PM

Hi Darren, thanks!! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/6/2017 11:15:00 PM

So much sadness in this write.. Arthur, A long, long time ago, I fell into deep feeling of anxiety. My heart started to race, a feeling of doom after my sister died. Until I changed my whole life did I finally heal... I hope you find that peace after having a near death experience ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 8:49:00 PM

Thanks Eve, is day by day it seems.