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SEPTEMBER WHISPERS

SEPTEMBER WHISPERS
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warmth retreats
rain taps the dry leaves
muddy boots
crisp air bites
school bus yellow bleeds through fog
cold coffee steams cold

Copyright © sara Etgen-Baker | Year Posted 2025

12th gradeautumnseptembershadorma

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September 25, 2025 at 6:09 PM

A haunting end- you always do well with atmosphere

sara Etgen-Baker

September 26, 2025 at 5:22 PM

awww, thank you....I appreciate that comment, hugs, Sara

September 25, 2025 at 5:44 PM

I think this is the first poem I've read in the form, Sara. Well done my favorite! Love, Bill

sara Etgen-Baker

September 25, 2025 at 5:50 PM

you're so sweet, Bill...I 've grown to like this form 3/5/3/3/7/5 thanks for your visit today, hugs, Sara

September 25, 2025 at 12:50 PM

You're making me realize that I probably love everything about September ~

sara Etgen-Baker

September 25, 2025 at 5:50 PM

thanks for those kind, uplifiting words....I pretty much like everything about September as well

Dr. Vandana Sharma

September 25, 2025 at 6:01 AM

Beauty of september never gets old!!

sara Etgen-Baker

September 25, 2025 at 5:50 PM

you are sooo right...thanks for visiting and commenting

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