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September Nights

darkness sneaks in through moonlit-creased skies and scribbles on these lonely walls, it's not night that propositions me, it's memories (and you) coming from within long, lonely nights that echo with doors slamming shut on the command of a seasoned wind. as another night arrives, i tuck myself in as the moon does beneath her feathered-clouds, my breath is as moist as night's air as i drift off to sleep. night's shadows seduce me, pressing me harder and harder atop this tangled web of sheets, that hold me tighter than thoughts yet my mind is naked, more so than i as i rush towards the peak of this moment, this night that can't end all too soon. i listen to the stroke of clock's hands as they rape me of emotion i hear the bells toll and revisit that moment again i mourn beneath night's veil hours before i arise with morning alone... awaking to the rise and fall of winded breath, howling just outside my window

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/10/2020 7:09:00 AM
A very powerful and deeply affecting poem that brings September nights to life in our eyes. Congrats on your win the contest my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/10/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Chris :)
Date: 2/9/2020 6:44:00 PM
Very moving, strong images and metaphor. Congrats and kudos my friend,
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much Sam... hugs
Date: 11/14/2013 10:44:00 PM
Great use of symbols and imagery. I could hear the doors slam and feel the shadow. --Alex Roth
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:03:00 PM
Excellent esp. the "i listen to the stroke of clock's hands as they rape me of emotion" bit. I can feel the panic+urgency+paranoia in it.
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Date: 10/1/2013 9:10:00 AM
I always find your words so moving. You describe sadness with such beauty it almost makes it alluring.
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:24:00 PM
This is amazing and emotionally deep. I especially loved the last verse. Fantastic work, Sandra!...You might like my poem titled, "No Shoulder To Cry On", it is similar to this one...Thank you for the nice comments!
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:25:00 AM
This is so poignantly written--lovely flow and use of metaphors. I LOVED the second stanza ! Thanks for the congrats.
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:24:00 AM
This is so poignantly written--lovely flow and use of metaphors. I LOVED the second stanza ! Thanks for the congrats.
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Date: 9/30/2013 2:53:00 AM
Well written Sandra. Very much enjoyed.
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Date: 9/29/2013 4:28:00 PM
You have such a beautiful way with words, Sandy. (or do you prefer to be called Sandra? I never asked you). YOu should be Sandy and we can be Sandy and Andie. hahaha. I am a September baby. I know you are Libra. Is sept. your month? Or October? I think this poem also describes very well the later autumn months.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/1/2013 9:13:00 AM
Happy Birthday in advance! Usually I am late with birthdays so I don't want to take any chances missing your big day. Oops sorry Andrea I missed yours. I am a September baby as well.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2013 5:08:00 PM
thank you Andrea (or is it Andie?) I do prefer Sandy, are you a libra baby too? I am October, and yeah it does fit the later months, but, this day is the birthday of my first love, who passed away at too young and age! Thank you for your sweet comments...love and hugs Sandy!

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