September Nights

darkness sneaks in
through moonlit-creased skies
and scribbles on these lonely walls,
it's not night that propositions me,
it's memories (and you) 
coming from within long, lonely nights
that echo with doors slamming shut
on the command of a seasoned wind.

as another night arrives,
i tuck myself in as the moon does
beneath her feathered-clouds,
my breath is as moist as night's air
as i drift off to sleep.

night's shadows seduce me,
pressing me harder and harder
atop this tangled web of sheets,
that hold me tighter than thoughts
yet my mind is naked, more so than i
as i rush towards the peak
of this moment, this night
that can't end all too soon.


i listen to the stroke
of clock's hands
as they rape me of emotion
i hear the bells toll
and revisit that moment again

i mourn beneath night's veil
hours before i arise
with morning alone...

awaking to the rise and fall
of winded breath, howling
just outside my window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 10, 2020 at 7:09 AM
A very powerful and deeply affecting poem that brings September nights to life in our eyes. Congrats on your win the contest my friend.
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February 10, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Thanks so much Chris :)
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February 9, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Very moving, strong images and metaphor. Congrats and kudos my friend,
Adams Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so very much Sam... hugs
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November 14, 2013 at 10:44 PM
Great use of symbols and imagery. I could hear the doors slam and feel the shadow. --Alex Roth
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October 13, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Excellent esp. the "i listen to the stroke of clock's hands as they rape me of emotion" bit. I can feel the panic+urgency+paranoia in it.
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October 1, 2013 at 9:10 AM
I always find your words so moving. You describe sadness with such beauty it almost makes it alluring.
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September 30, 2013 at 4:24 PM
This is amazing and emotionally deep. I especially loved the last verse. Fantastic work, Sandra!...You might like my poem titled, "No Shoulder To Cry On", it is similar to this one...Thank you for the nice comments!
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September 30, 2013 at 7:25 AM
This is so poignantly written--lovely flow and use of metaphors. I LOVED the second stanza ! Thanks for the congrats.
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September 30, 2013 at 7:24 AM
This is so poignantly written--lovely flow and use of metaphors. I LOVED the second stanza ! Thanks for the congrats.
Mohammed Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 2:53 AM
Well written Sandra. Very much enjoyed.
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September 29, 2013 at 4:28 PM
You have such a beautiful way with words, Sandy. (or do you prefer to be called Sandra? I never asked you). YOu should be Sandy and we can be Sandy and Andie. hahaha. I am a September baby. I know you are Libra. Is sept. your month? Or October? I think this poem also describes very well the later autumn months.
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October 1, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Happy Birthday in advance! Usually I am late with birthdays so I don't want to take any chances missing your big day. Oops sorry Andrea I missed yours. I am a September baby as well.
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September 29, 2013 at 5:08 PM
thank you Andrea (or is it Andie?) I do prefer Sandy, are you a libra baby too? I am October, and yeah it does fit the later months, but, this day is the birthday of my first love, who passed away at too young and age! Thank you for your sweet comments...love and hugs Sandy!
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