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Contest: September Falls

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

15 September 2024

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September Falls

Squirrels are gathering; nuts to bury
Eagerly digging, for warm earth is soft
Painted, a sky in hues that are many
This golden glister is scattered aloft 

Even autumnal, as thin sun rides low
Men strut in T-shirts, ignoring the chill
Beauties all bare what they dare… one last show
Enjoying the looks laid upon them still

Ripened and ready are these orchard fruits
Falling for fear of remaining unpicked
An autumn frost cometh, a winter hint
Leaving some lying like leaves to be kicked

Lovers on sheepskin, a stove that burns wood
Soft music playing: September is good
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Ashley Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 6:54 PM
Dear Terry, congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest with your beautiful poem that captures the essence of September with poetic ease. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Flood Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated. Terry
Flood Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated. Terry
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:51 PM
Loved the parts about clothing worn in second stanza. the ending couplet was outstanding. GREAT acrostic . Congratss
Flood Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Not my usual style but I did kinda like it. Glad you did too. Terry
Jones Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 8:33 PM
The last two lines are my favorite of this lovely poem! Good luck in the contest!
Flood Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Thanks, Karen. Glad you enjoyed.
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