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Contest: September Falls

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

15 September 2024

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Squirrels are gathering; nuts to bury Eagerly digging, for warm earth is soft Painted, a sky in hues that are many This golden glister is scattered aloft Even autumnal, as thin sun rides low Men strut in T-shirts, ignoring the chill Beauties all bare what they dare… one last show Enjoying the looks laid upon them still Ripened and ready are these orchard fruits Falling for fear of remaining unpicked An autumn frost cometh, a winter hint Leaving some lying like leaves to be kicked Lovers on sheepskin, a stove that burns wood Soft music playing: September is good

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Date: 10/14/2024 6:54:00 PM
Dear Terry, congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest with your beautiful poem that captures the essence of September with poetic ease. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/17/2024 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated. Terry
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Date: 10/17/2024 11:50:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated. Terry
Date: 9/30/2024 1:51:00 PM
Loved the parts about clothing worn in second stanza. the ending couplet was outstanding. GREAT acrostic . Congratss
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Date: 10/17/2024 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Not my usual style but I did kinda like it. Glad you did too. Terry
Date: 9/14/2024 8:33:00 PM
The last two lines are my favorite of this lovely poem! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/17/2024 11:48:00 AM
Thanks, Karen. Glad you enjoyed.

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