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Poetry/Acostic/Rhyme/September Falls
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1673-791-13
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, September 13, 2024
For the International Contest, September Falls
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 09/30/2024

FIRST PLACE

September Falls


Summer flowers gracefully bow dying,
Etched leaves are twirling, swirling in the wind;
Patchwork carpets cradle the leaves crying,
The wild gusts send them into a whirlwind.
Earth's crisp morning hugs me like a lover,
Musical notes whisper such a sweet song;
Beautiful hues mingle as ground cover,
Each bird taking part in this singalong.
Rain drips as I walk crimson forests trails,
Fall is nature's gentle weeping goodbye;
And melancholy I hear the sad tales,
Leaves rustle ... rain a drum beating reply.
Like hidden treaures I gather leaf bouquets;
Stained glass leaves will fall for just a few days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/1/2024 7:48:00 AM
SO lovely and descriptive! Constance, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Favorite line~~5. Janice
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Date: 10/1/2024 11:41:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the compliment and for the congrats, Constance
Date: 9/30/2024 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations Constance. Excellent Acrostic & great imagery. Best Wishes!
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Date: 10/1/2024 5:44:00 AM
Martin, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, Constance
Date: 9/30/2024 1:37:00 PM
This is so gorgeous, Constance. I guess I am the first to comment here. Congrats on my contest.
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Date: 9/30/2024 4:13:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the contest and my amazing placement, and for the compliment, and congrats, appreciate. Yes, sometimes no comments happen, Constance
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