Mystic Rose Rose Poet Monorhyme

September Dreams

Asleep on a pile of hay 
my dreams are waiting for the day 
when summer relinquishes her ray 
to a re-canvassed season of red clay ;
  
Burgundy leaves in the wind sway,  
as September returns like a Jay   


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Contest Name	Bite Size Poem no51 |

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Panagiota Romios September 3, 2022 at 9:35 PM Hi…a of work of art indeed. I best add you to my to follow list! Not only that, make this a Fav. Pangie xx Mystic Rose Rose September 3, 2022 at 10:21 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear Panagiota

Rico Leffanta September 3, 2022 at 12:13 PM Happy to know you were making hay! Les Feuilles Mortes another day! Aloha! Mystic Rose Rose September 3, 2022 at 2:33 PM Yes I spin Hay into Gold lol, magic fingers, lol, thanks for stopping by

Linda Alice Fowler September 3, 2022 at 7:33 AM a re-canvassed season - lovely Vie! Linda Mystic Rose Rose September 3, 2022 at 2:33 PM we need to learn to reframe with the season dear Linda , thank you for stopping by

Vijay Pandit September 3, 2022 at 6:08 AM Lovely September dreams, Vienna. Best to you my friend. Mystic Rose Rose September 3, 2022 at 2:33 PM Yes when the weather gets cooler our dreams change and re arrange, thanks for reading Vijay

Victor Buhagiar September 2, 2022 at 10:43 PM Who doesn't love Autumn? A lovely bite size poem. Best for a win. Hugs. Mystic Rose Rose September 3, 2022 at 2:32 PM its my favorite time of year Victor, the leaves change color and the cool breeze is most welcome, thanks for stopping by

Michael Tor September 2, 2022 at 6:24 PM Wonderful Poem that reflects the changing season, Vie. A wonderful entry for the contest.Blessings your way... Mystic Rose Rose September 2, 2022 at 6:41 PM Thank you for stopping by Michael, have a blessed evening

Suzanne Delaney September 2, 2022 at 4:09 PM Love this early Fall poem, as it is my favorite season. The mono-rhyme form is perfect for the theme. Best, SuZ Mystic Rose Rose September 2, 2022 at 6:41 PM I didn't realize it was called a mono rhyme thank you for telling me Suzanne