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September Approaches

Fall Embrace With decay Slowly replaced Youth slipping away Hanging in a dark mood This painting misunderstood Like the touch of a stranger's hand Suddenly there's a change in the wind 8/24/19

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 8/24/2022 5:40:00 AM

Especially love those last two lines. Very nice!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2019 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations n your win with this fine Nonet Wren! : ) xxoo

Wren Rushing
Date: 9/4/2019 9:11:00 PM

Thank you Connie! Have wonderful evening!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/24/2019 10:05:00 PM

A dark and mesmerizing poem, Wren. The season of aging is beautifully expressed. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan

Wren Rushing
Date: 8/24/2019 10:40:00 PM

Thank you Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/24/2019 9:30:00 AM

Oh, spectacular penning. As one who suffers from the SAD, this one especially speaks to me... My best to you in the contest! xomo

Wren Rushing
Date: 8/24/2019 9:35:00 AM

Thank you Maureen! Have a wonderful weekend my friend!