Valsa George Poet Free verse

September 8th

I can’t let September slip away
Without a thought of my mother
She had come into this Earth on 8th September,  
To birth her children and bring them up
Raising us in love, giving us all she had
Now we raise our eyes to the golden shore to wish her
Happy Birthday as the heavenly band sings in tune.

Sept.21. 2022

Remember September Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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Bill Baker September 23, 2022 at 1:34 PM Bless you Valsa, a good daughter for a loving mother. Thank you for honoring your mother through your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

John Watt September 22, 2022 at 10:51 PM Beautiful thoughts of the beautiful woman who brought you into the world and raised you. What a blessing mothers are. I celebrated my mother's birthday on Sept 14th. Thank you for sharing these sweet thoughts, Valsa. Best wishes in the contest ~ John

Irfanulla Shariff September 22, 2022 at 2:39 PM Yes, Moms are the best. A beautiful tribute to your mom. Very well penned, Valsa. Valsa George September 22, 2022 at 9:14 PM Moms are the most loved ones in the lives of children. Thanks a lot for your kind visit and comment !

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2022 at 2:30 PM My mom’s was on the 15th. Love the thought of a heavenly birthday band. Cheers ~ Kim Valsa George September 22, 2022 at 9:13 PM So September is significant for you too. Thanks a lot Kim.

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2022 at 5:11 AM I am saddened at your loss, but you have the assurance of her being in that wonderful place with beauty we can't comprehend here on earth. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara Valsa George September 22, 2022 at 9:12 PM She lived a full life. But losing a mother is always painful and the memories of mothers keep inspiring children.Thanks a lot dear Sara !

Victor Buhagiar September 22, 2022 at 1:48 AM Your appreciation to your mother is indeed worth reading many times. Valsa George September 22, 2022 at 8:49 AM Yes, I love and respect my mother. There is nothing special about it . Most of the children do love their mothers. But I always feel that my mother deserves a little more

Gershon Wolf September 21, 2022 at 9:05 PM Yes, indeed! There's no forgetting Momma -- ever! Sweetness in Remembrance, Gershon Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:33 PM Mother's will have always a place in her children's hearts ! Thank you Gershon !

Darlene De Beaulieu September 21, 2022 at 12:09 PM Hello Valsa George, A lovely tribute to your mom. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu September 22, 2022 at 11:14 AM Hello Valsa, you are welcome. Hugs. Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:32 PM Thanks a lot Darlene

Rico Leffanta September 21, 2022 at 10:50 AM Proof that her parents celebrated the New Year joyously! Aloha! Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:31 PM :) :)

Michael Tor September 21, 2022 at 6:26 AM A tender tribute to your beloved mother is felt in your words Dear Valsa... Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:25 PM Thank you Michael for your lovely words

Vijay Pandit September 21, 2022 at 5:13 AM Heartfelt tribute. You honor your beloved mother with this poem, Valsa. Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:23 PM Thanks a lot Vijay! Can't give what mothers truly deserve

Sotto Poet September 21, 2022 at 3:34 AM "What a wonderful tribute to your dear mother, and very nicely written, Valsa. I hope that she is looking down from heaven and reading all of these wonderful words. They continue to exist in our thoughts and memories. Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:23 PM Since the number of lines are limited, we cannot express our genuine feelings fully ! Thanks a lot Lasaad for your apprciation.

Tom Cunningham September 20, 2022 at 11:40 PM Lovely tribute to your Mother Valsa, they live in our hearts and memories. Tom Valsa George September 21, 2022 at 9:21 PM Thanks a lot Tom. Yes, mothers will live in our memories though death snatches them away.