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September

Slipping slipping sweet summer is slipping away, Ebbing into the ocean of my memories. Palpable is my changing mood when all too soon, The Equinox arrives to l e n g t h e n shadows. Enticed by cooler days and nights, My birth month acquiesces, then brilliantly begins Bursting forth in bright beguiling hues! Elegies evoked in me by summer’s leaving still linger in my poetry. Resolved to all of it - at last - I turn to the revelry of fall festivities. Written 8/9/2015 Originally For the Birth Month Acrostic Poetry Contest Now for Julia Ward's Your Favourite Poem From AUGUST 2015 Contest

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Date: 8/26/2016 10:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem Andrea. I think one that I had not read although it seems familiar.
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:58:00 AM
A 7 for this beautiful WINNING poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 8/26/2016 6:49:00 AM
This is very pretty and I hadn't read it before. Congrats on 2nd place, Sweetie, you deserve it with the 'richness' of these lines ... CayCay
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Date: 8/26/2016 6:13:00 AM
What an awesome acrostic!! Congrats Andrea, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 8/22/2015 4:30:00 PM
An amazing write Andrea that gives life and flair to you birth month. Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 8/17/2015 2:49:00 PM
awesome, Andrea... SKAT
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:45:00 AM
Love the lengthening of shadows Andrea! Lovely acrostic n great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:08:00 PM
This is a beautiful September tapestry with wonderful use of spacing Andrea...I am a Sept 1st baby myself...congrats
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Date: 8/16/2015 8:23:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this beauty and thanks for visiting my refrain poem
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Date: 8/16/2015 11:16:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserving win. Great one Andrea in weaving the textures of this beautiful poem and in capturing the mood. I too love this month but only when the winds blows with the bunch of colorful clouds. Shall be waiting for your B' day dear friend. Nothing new I hope to post something soon. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor.
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Date: 8/16/2015 11:16:00 AM
Dear Andrea....wow! A spectacular september acrostic! Hearty congrats!!!!!! .....love, Anu:-)
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Date: 8/16/2015 11:13:00 AM
Dear Andrea....wow! A spectacular september acrostic! Hearty congrats!!!!!! .....love, Anu:-)
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Date: 8/16/2015 4:12:00 AM
Had you been born in May - I am certain that your entry would have been no less brilliantly penned ... puts my futile effort into something of an amateurish scribbling. Congrats. ;)
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Date: 8/15/2015 8:41:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Liked it.
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:43:00 PM
Beautifully penned Andrea...Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:22:00 PM
My birthday is September 8th. I enjoyed your winning poem Andrea!
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Date: 8/15/2015 5:16:00 PM
Andrea, a big congratulations on your win in the contest, wonderful acrostic
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Date: 8/15/2015 4:48:00 PM
Hi Andre...September signals fall on your side of the world and in contrast, spring in the Southern hemisphere (for me)...many congrats on this marvellous pic u've elegantly painted of this transition & outstading win *******(:heers, Tbang
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Date: 8/15/2015 4:20:00 PM
Read this one a few days ago and really enjoyed it, although I didn't take time then to comment. Congratulations! I am trying to get back in the flow again and hope to be present here on the soup more in the coming weeks. Thanks for your comments on my blitz poem.
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Date: 8/15/2015 3:53:00 PM
i loved this, andrea, so evocative with an undercurrent of poignancy; you really thought outside the box with this one, very inventive, very personal too - congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 8/15/2015 3:33:00 PM
gosh sorry i missed this before Andrea - many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2015 3:32:00 PM
So very well done, even your presentation is poetic! Grats on your second place medal!! ;)
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Date: 8/14/2015 3:35:00 PM
with the change of fall....the colors dazzle us all....with a welcomed end to the heat....September births something magnifique....;)
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Date: 8/13/2015 10:20:00 PM
The seasons change so quickly. I like this one! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/13/2015 2:36:00 PM
An acrostic bursting with emotions; a month which heralds the start of our Maltese rainy season... still warm and ideal for swimming (in fact I'm usually still swimming up to mid November!) ~ paul
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