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Soon a walk in the forest will bring joy to the eye Each leaf will be turning shades of autumn, Prior to their descent to make a crunchy floor. Then time seems to stand still in the morning fog Eye catching images, the hills, the fields below where Mystic looking trees stare out at you, branches bare. Bringing about a mythical look through the mist. Eyes cannot take in the changing scenes Remembering it to camera is the best way 25th September Penned August 8th 2015

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Date: 8/17/2015 11:23:00 PM
Wonderful September acrostic Seren! Congrats on big win! I see sept. ruling this contest!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2015 12:46:00 AM
Dr Upma how nice to see your comment I am glad September is so easy to write about, Thank you ....Seren
Date: 8/17/2015 2:54:00 PM
Seren, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/18/2015 12:47:00 AM
Skat thanks for stopping by with a comment ...Seren
Date: 8/16/2015 9:23:00 PM
I am September 8th.
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:27:00 PM
soon be here, have a great day...Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 8:45:00 PM
A lot of beautiful images i find here, Seren. Congrats.
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:16:00 PM
Jag thanks so much for your comment....Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 7:25:00 PM
I am partial to September except the part where I get older *lol*. Congratulations on your winning poem.;0)
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:17:00 PM
which date is Sept are you Richard I am the 25th Thanks for your Congrats ...Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 5:21:00 PM
a lovely autumnal one, strong on imagery, so vivid, i could just see those mystical trees - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte....Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 4:51:00 PM
Oh this is a treasure, a glimpse of the season, I cannot wait to photograph autumn! Grats on your win;)
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:20:00 PM
yes it is a beautiful time of the year, thanks for stopping by ....Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 4:35:00 PM
Lovely write, Seren. September is so beautiful and you did a great job capturing the beauty. Congratlations.
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:22:00 PM
Faye your comment is so kind thanks ...Seren
Date: 8/15/2015 4:09:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/16/2015 9:25:00 PM
Thx Jan ...Seren
Date: 8/10/2015 8:09:00 PM
such Beautiful words....mental scenery was observed....so much truth, so much Beauty....telling you this, that's just my duty....;)
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Date: 8/9/2015 1:37:00 AM
wonderful imagery Seren - good luck:-)hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/9/2015 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Jan...Seren

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